Saturday, June 18, 2016

Release The Prisoner Comments

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Release the prisoner living within you
Let him see the light,
let him enjoy the nature
Let him see some beautiful creations
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M. Asim Nehal
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T Rajan Evol 23 July 2020

Enough of you living in dark caves Where the world is seen By the series of reflections Reality and truth is by far elusive

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T Rajan Evol 14 July 2020

Inspiring poem Asimji. you always write very interesting poems.

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T Rajan Evol 12 November 2016

Excellent poem so inspiring n motivating

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 June 2016

Enough of you living in dark caves! ! Nice piece of work.

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Aarzoo Mehek 18 June 2016

When are in real then why imagine? god helps those who help themselves. beautifully expressed thought. I believe in conquering.. a free spirited soul has the tendencies to spread joys more then an imprisoned soul. Liberate your thoughts and live in peace. one more marvel from your pen.10plussssssssss

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Kelly Kurt 18 June 2016

There is nothing that feels more free than releasing one's self to experience

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Anil Kumar Panda 18 June 2016

Beautifully written. Living in the lap of nature gives ultimate joy. Thanks for sharing.

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Indira Renganathan 18 June 2016

Thank you Asim...I feel both our poems are somewhat nearer to a same theme...You've crafted very well.. God bless you

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