Thursday, September 8, 2005

Release My Mind Comments

Rating: 4.8

I wish you would leave
let my body be at peace
Release my mind!
from its caged existance
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Stephanie van Oudtshoorn
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Brian Routh 27 November 2005

your name is darkness says it all......beautiful, powerful, clear poem.

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Aaron Rigodon 18 November 2005

Great poem and I enjoy how you said it with passion. Somehow, I don't know maybe this poem can be talking about being a captive and wanting to be free from someone's hand! Sincerely, Aaron Rigodon

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Mary Nagy 18 November 2005

Very nice Stephanie. I'm enjoying your work very nice. sincerely, Mary

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Thomas Viruvelil 14 September 2005

Your mind can never get that release.Real good work Regards Thomas

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Stephanie van Oudtshoorn

Stephanie van Oudtshoorn

East London, South Africa
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