Tuesday, December 22, 2009

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Stroppy stamping feet
ego driven drives
Fractious empty
clashing sound
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monica monet
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Afzal Shauq 05 January 2010

its really a sweet poem with rich idea and enough meaningful..well done 10/10

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Nikunj Sharma 22 December 2009

I am lucky to have read and commented on it first. This is such a beautiful rhythmic prayer like poem, that one can't help admiring it...the last stanza thrilled me.... Three stanzas all belong to and describe a part of journey finally leading to the relaease or Nirvana as we call it.....thanks 4 sharing

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