Saturday, January 20, 2007

Relaxing Comments

Rating: 5.0

Air is warm
Laying down enjoying
The serenity of the day
Listening to sounds passing
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Alison Smith
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fanniesson - 24 January 2007

a nice poetic tranquil moment in time read. Enjoyed

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Francesca Johnson 21 January 2007

Yes, I found this very relaxing, too, Alison. Takes me out of this dark wintery atmosphere (in England) to thoughts of spring. Ahhh.....now there's a thought. Love, Fran xx

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David Harris 21 January 2007

Alison, relaxing, relaxing! Yes, it did the trick. But now I'm too relaxed to do the work I want to do. Excellent Poem and I gave it a big 10. Keep writing, love your words. - David

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Jim Foulk 20 January 2007

i loved this poem. i can close my eyes and see everything you wrote, i can smell the aire, and feel the breeze, this is some poem.

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Alison Smith

Alison Smith

Orange, New South Wales, Australia
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