Wednesday, August 20, 2008

Relax Comments

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Sometimes you need to just take a deep breath

Sleep.....but stay awake
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Sean Irvine
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Myrtle Turtle 27 August 2008

This is one of my favorites of your poems, the end of it is so hopeful and beautiful, iti is such a contrast to the darkness that a lot of your other poems express. It almost has a 'Buddhist' feel to it in that it assures you that is it all nothing, and that always 'tomorrow will be OK' :)

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Sanford, Florida
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