Wednesday, March 1, 2023

Relativity Comments

Rating: 4.9

Eventually is a really,
really long time
most especially
when you're waiting for, hoping for
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M.J. Lemon
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This gem of a poem now ranks #36 among the Best Member Poems on ph. Congratulations Dear Poet

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M.J. Lemon 08 March 2023

I had no idea. Thank you so much.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 March 2023

You poem reminds me of Einstein's theory of relativity dear poet Well penned!

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M.J. Lemon 08 March 2023

Great observation. Thank you so much

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Billy Loving 02 March 2023

Well Done!

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M.J. Lemon 03 March 2023

Thank you, Billy.

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Richard Wlodarski 02 March 2023

From the title to the theme to the succinctness...all is very well...right now! Another winner, my friend!

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M.J. Lemon 03 March 2023

So much appreciated, Richard!

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Nosheen Irfan 02 March 2023

Great ink! Succinct gem of a piece!

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M.J. Lemon 03 March 2023

Many thanks, Nosheen!

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 March 2023

Beautifully inked. Short and to the point. Nicely expressed. Thanks.

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M.J. Lemon 03 March 2023

Thanks so much, Anil.

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Time is the most relative thing. My wife sleeps well, for her nights are too short. I am insomniac and my nights are always long, long and longest, beyond words

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M.J. Lemon 03 March 2023

Thank you so much, Unnikrishnan. My nights, too, are far too short.

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Sandra Feldman 01 March 2023

How very brilliantly communicated and felt. We feel and hear all the disappointment that the word 'eventually' carries in itself. Top points.

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M.J. Lemon 03 March 2023

Yes, Sandra. Few words dissapoint the way 'eventually' does. Thanks for reading.

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