Relationships Are Like Public Toilets... Comments

U value nothing no relationship

u r telling an universal phenomena in a nice way, , very true..most of us love ourselves only..nwadays..it's just 'Me, Myself, and I' only..

A mystical relationship with God Bounds you and me in divinity And when once in there is no out sweet

Nicely done. Very well conceived. I think there are many other places except toilet which we get in and get out. They may be shrines, Malls etc. but toilet is not a good comparison. So far as the poem is concerned, its really good to read it. Nice write with an odd title. Thanks for sharing.....