Wednesday, November 25, 2009

Relationships Comments

Rating: 5.0

It is a chord of silk
softer and finer than milk
aching to break
when the passions freak
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lalitha iyer
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Catrina Heart 25 November 2009

awesome composition...one of the best poem i have read this day! ! !

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Nikunj Sharma 25 November 2009

yet, relationships suffer in degrees they conquer only one dot and extend not to the centre spot....... Amazing poem...you have explained life and the relationship through simple geometry...I liked the metaphor of conquering only a dot... Lalitha this is one of the best poems I have ever read.. wow is the word

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