Relationship Comments

enjoyed reading this..truly i am LOL

I just luv the irony! Thanks also for commenting my poems.That was very kind of you.

Wellpenned the relation between complicated life and our deeds.

Interesting poem. Whether cheerful? For me rather not. These are sad observations, if it is real. It is written very well but it doesn't surprise me. Your poems are being read with pleasure, since it is always possible to find something what will interest us in. (10 v.) Greetings. :) Maria Barbara Korynt

Hard realities of life in a witty fashion, good sir!

HAHAHAHA! ! ! good view of what some jobs should pay! ! ! good humour, my friend,10+

This was kind of humour, satire, allegory type for sort of haiku piece... A unique poetic description of relationship...in just a few words you have described marvelously...a poem written meticulously.10/10

I appreciate the finesse of speech and the acuity of observations about the reality of the day.10+++

Offering: lifelong service Payment: pension benefit Engineering relationship....... we do for growingthe relatiosnship. it is permanent bonding try and suceed also.... beautiful write...10 read mine butteflies around and sparatw ways...tks

various relationships...some exploiting...some casual...some long lasting brought out well in this write

an interesting, mind blowing, humor filled poem... lovely! !

Very interesting and humorous write! As a relationship must work satisfactorily, so I'll give a tenner with a smile.