Sunday, May 10, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

Physically, emotionally, mentally drained
I pretend to be happy; it’s meant to be changed
Feeling bitter now, “women to be blamed”
Poor, ugly, shy guys, when do we reign?
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Anthony Williams 17 June 2009

the poem is so real, the feeling of being a nobody, feeling worthless, like you won't ever get better. The flow is solid and I'm now a fan!

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Surya . 13 May 2009

interesting and beautifull lines.nice to read.posted 10 for u surya

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 11 May 2009

Interesting and enjoyable write..........

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rago rago 10 May 2009

a good write..............to ponder on..........

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Bilal Raja

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