Saturday, November 14, 2009

Rejuvenating Our Mind Comments

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We close our eyes
and into sleep fall
rejuvenating our mind
so filled with abstract thoughts,
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David Harris
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Carol Gall 15 November 2009

mystery of sleep good write 10

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Fay Slimm 15 November 2009

Good title for an intriguing subject David - - sleep - which 'knits up the ravelled sleeve of care' certainly can rejuvenate if we yield to it's medicine - - a fine verse... warm wishes from Fay

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Patti Masterman 14 November 2009

I really thought the ideas in here were deep and intriguing. Nice writing.

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David Harris

David Harris

Bradfield, England
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