Tuesday, November 24, 2015

Rejuvenate My Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am still calm in my mind
As life as fresh rising sun
I hold my rays of love I feel
You come on and paint my mind.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Valsa George 11 September 2019

Like the fresh morning, you wish to keep your heart pure, fresh and free of all vices! For that you feel, you need God's grace. You believe that His light alone can illumine your soul! A beautiful devotional poem! A 10

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Aniruddha Pathak 19 June 2019

The piece begins beautifully and creates calm atmosphere as is the morning, and builds up the theme. Another prayerful piece. Thanks for sharing.

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Pushpendra Patel 19 February 2019

Conscience should rejuvenate love with greater and broader faith. This poem is very interesting. A lovely sharing is done by you sir.

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Hazel Durham 01 December 2015

Asking for pureness of heart and soul as the morning dawns fresh and new ready to embrace the day and God watching over us all with his great compassion and understanding! Beautiful write!

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Akhtar Jawad 01 December 2015

A lovely prayer asking God to rejuvenate the eternal love.

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M Asim Nehal 25 November 2015

Paint my mind took it to a different level.....The morning calmness, ringing bells, rising sun and chirping birds all set the true tone of morning...Thanks for sharing SIr,

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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