Thursday, April 16, 2009

Rejoice The Sun Comments

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Rejoice The Sun

Every morning, when, we meet
You thaw in a smile
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Tsira Gogeshvili
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Andrew Blakemore 30 April 2009

A wonderful celebration of the sunlight. Great work Tsira. Best wishes, Andrew

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C. P. Sharma 28 April 2009

Out doing the other, The sun want to laugh at us As over blinded from its beauty.... You must joy by - the Sun, We have blinded from you… CP

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Mark Nwagwu 24 April 2009

You thaw in a smile... the sun wants to laugh at us, as blinded over by its beauty. Shine sun, shine, that Tsira may guide us to your smile and beauty, for in her you brightness fills our souls. a 10, Tsira

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Kesav Easwaran 23 April 2009

a read giving much rejoice...yes; the sun through its morn, brings joy and freshness in all beings...how poorly we respond to its grace ignoring the beauty of morn hours! good work, Tsira...thanks...10

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Sandra Fowler 22 April 2009

Your poem is filled with light, Tsira. It is warming to the soul and uplifting to the spirit.10, for you. Kind regards, Sandra

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Sadiqullah Khan 16 April 2009

Good style of writing, lovely. Tsira.10

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Fiona Davidson 16 April 2009

Makes you feel so much better when the sun comes out doesn't it? ...lovely write Tsira...Fi 10+++

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Muhammad Ali 16 April 2009

Love to sun............. for that it keep our lives warm! ! ! ! ! ! ! it care for us!

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 16 April 2009

We don't get a lot of sun here Tsira, but when we do we party :) 10

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