Tuesday, May 11, 2010

Rejoice: In Morning's Glory Comments

Rating: 3.8

REJOICE!

O’ the early dawn spills through the blind
The window and all around
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Almedia Knight-Oliver
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 25 July 2010

Ma’am who is behind this ‘Dawn’…just Dawn or someone else…where subconscious trying for a ‘Dawn-Fixation’ of some thing ‘Un-Gotten’…or ‘Verily-Gotten’……here is the beauty in this poetry that readers must delve/contemplate deep to get the answer…enigmatic to me… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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wonderful poem.. I think i see a spiritual connection.. more than metaphysics. :) . Wonderful poem.. i live it.

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it's like reading the SWISS FAMILY ROBINSON again... nice write!

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Pranab K Chakraborty 13 May 2010

You have painted love on a canvass of breaking light from dark. And this light we want to have from the beginning of life, but reality mislead us to the non-satiated passions. Any way, very compact and skillful picturisation of a dreamy reunion with the innerself. May it be the memory of a person who has departed before, but strictly it is the passion to attain the greater or alter igo of the poet himself by the shadow of some other dearest one. Well-written, enjoyed. With regards, 10+ pranab

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