Rejection's Temptation Comments
Well there she was, the girl I loved,
With no one at her side.
She smiled and waived as I approached,
In shock, I then replied.
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Finely penned. this is a perfect example of poetic discipline
I really enjoyed the back and forth between the central characters as well as the way it flowed. Great balance, great poem.
So beautiful....to feel empathy is the landmark of a decent human being. Another winner 10+++
a vey beautiful truth, no matter what one'll do they get what the fate's written...thank you sir for sharing your thoughts regards balouch
It is beautifully written.......so true of life life like a boomerang brings love back to you......in endurance...touching read!
Beautiful poem - a true to life situation played out with compassion showcasing loves endurance
I once again with interest have read your verses … they differ an originality of a manner of the letter and remind aroma of Russian classical poets of the twentieth century … sincere...
the feeling of the poet well brought out in the poem....there is poetry in your poems...
Amazing. I am breath-taken! The truth is blunt, and yet so beautiful! It reminds me of a peron i once knew......
When we choose to put our hearts out there, then we also choose the possibility of rejection. Reason being that we all have a particular 'vision' we're looking for, a certain set of values, and of course, chemistry plays a big part in drawing people together. If it isn't there, it just isn't there. This is a wonderfully perspective piece, and it seems you've done quite a bit of soul-searching with this one. Love it! Linda :)
thank you sir for writing this beautiful poem. i read the others you recommended but this one hit closer home. i know that love n rejection go hand in hand but its always how one reacts that determines how theyll be. i might be only 18 but im told im more mature than all of my friends be they 16 or 24. thanky you sir again for these kind words and thanks for the comments too.
I have no words to comment on this piece... It swept me off my feet... Incredible....
I love this one...i too have felt the cold clutches of rejection burrowing into my soul...x
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7/19/2025 1:00:57 PM # 1.0.0
yes, this, I am sure, has happened to many ppl. I loved the flow and how your words are expressed. so touching and enlightening. fills my heart with sadness, but also with hope.