Sunday, March 26, 2006

Rejection Comments

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I was on my space voyage to the lover's dreamland,
My hopes were high; I was enjoying the thrilling emotional space walk,
Suddenly tethered cord of my love got cut,
I found myself floating in the darkness of the lonely universe.
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Lalay Allan 28 January 2009

I like the part where you describe the feeling of rejection as like finding oneself floating into the darkness of the lonely universe, lost among the stars in the dark skies, that no one could hear your cries. I felt a lump in my throat when I read those lines.

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Jay P Narain

Jay P Narain

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