Thursday, October 1, 2015

Rejected Teddy Comments

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Once there was a teddy
who seemed to be unhappy
It was from an old factory
that was running in the city
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Wild Grass Cad
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Dr Antony Theodore 01 January 2016

It had dreamt and desired.. to give kindness and love Why its here being forgotten by people it wanted to brighten? sad tone at the end. teddy felt rejected for ever........ wonderful imagination. you got into the heart of the poor teddy. great poem. thank you. tony

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Wild Grass Cad 29 January 2016

thanks too.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 October 2015

Very wonderful expression and wise sharing. Nicely drafted....10

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Wild Grass Cad 29 January 2016

thank you.

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