Rejected(Part One) Comments
She’s everything you’ve want
She’s your perfect little girl,
She’ll take everything you have
She’ll try to take the world,
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I really like this poem, the sytle of it and the way it flows, good job.
^^ its great! ! ! i can relate 2 it so much(u kno y) but hopefully it will turn out better 4 us 10/10^^ cant wait to read teh rest of it ur bestfriend, GiR
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7/21/2025 8:05:00 AM # 1.0.0
Very good. i can't wait til part two