Monday, July 19, 2010

{rejected By Love} Comments

Rating: 3.0

What have you done?
A smothering indistinctness of betrayal,
Memories darken and twist,
Becoming creatures of sin,
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Kieran J1996
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Celiene Watts 30 July 2010

this is AMAZING! ! its so well written and you have such a talent for this. its beautiful.

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Unwritten Soul 29 July 2010

Undiluted feeling.........you splash that feeling to portray what lies beneath your brain... This what i called 'raining at the night', beautiful but deep, dark and inspired

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Stefanie Fontker 19 July 2010

The ones we love most, do often condemn us. And we feel, or don't feel, to the point where we wish we've never felt anything at all. Good job putting a lot of emotion into your writing.

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Alicia Moore 19 July 2010

Another masterpiece!

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UnKnown Messenger 19 July 2010

That's an awesome poem. Full of passion and vigor. Perhaps love can often look down upon many but I fell it's a bit like yin and yang. Loneliness and company come and go all the time, and so does love. However I most like these lines, they're like a punchline at the end. Hated by that which can, Not even feel hatred,

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