What have you done?
A smothering indistinctness of betrayal,
Memories darken and twist,
Becoming creatures of sin,
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Undiluted feeling.........you splash that feeling to portray what lies beneath your brain... This what i called 'raining at the night', beautiful but deep, dark and inspired
The ones we love most, do often condemn us. And we feel, or don't feel, to the point where we wish we've never felt anything at all. Good job putting a lot of emotion into your writing.
That's an awesome poem. Full of passion and vigor. Perhaps love can often look down upon many but I fell it's a bit like yin and yang. Loneliness and company come and go all the time, and so does love. However I most like these lines, they're like a punchline at the end. Hated by that which can, Not even feel hatred,
this is AMAZING! ! its so well written and you have such a talent for this. its beautiful.