Thursday, November 6, 2008

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Rating: 5.0

eyes are dimmed
tears at the heart,
swim to te brim of despair,
air sobs and vents, vexed hopes
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shimon weinroth
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Anjali Sinha 09 November 2008

a little sad though eyes -sobs-tears-and then rejection. but i like the climax 'get up new winds will blow new opportunities will show' excellent AAAAA++++and 10+++ i loved it regards anju

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