reiterative Poetry Comments

repetition can enhance if used properly but tends to become boring if misused

a beautiful and expert writting..very well written, meaningful one 10+++++

a luminous write! so much to learn from it

poery for poets by a master of his craft

Rhyming poetry is clearly your strong suit.

And what in our world can be added to this? To attempt such a thing would evoke from me a hiss. But it is the best poem i've seen today i might imitate, but cannot create your way for when i get stuck, rather than force a rhyme, i'll just say 'nice work, ' you're an object trouve, a serendipitous find.

I can only reiterate I agree with your conclusions My pen namne is derived from piers ploughman

Sidi, what a mind of knowledge. They say you learn something everyday. I learnt a lot here with this one. Great write and thanks for sharing it. David

Wow, this certainly sits me in the corner of limited knowledge. Some people have wondrous privileges beyond other's wildest dreams. And yet, I do so love the standard of beauty and elegance in its standard of perfection. Masterfully brilliant, learned Sir. This is wondrously methodical and most enlightening. Regards, ~Milly.

Sidi, Thank you for taking the time for all of us to rediscover your passion for this style of writing. Old school.... yeah! Richard

How do you come up with such themes? This is truly amazing and educative. A student of poetry could cherish this forever. Sidi, you are quiet talented and have an excellent command over the language. The style of descriptions adapted here is flawless and the message is so well delivered to all poem lovers.