Friday, December 17, 2004

Reindeer Comments

Rating: 4.7

At the shopping centre.
I saw Santa.
Jolly old man he wasn't.
Body Mass Index about 50.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Allan James Saywell 18 December 2004

Herbert dont delet this poem, any with santa a child is a good poem it tells us about xmas, what ever you think about the poem does not matter it comes across as a poem, it has flow you have presented it well some one will get something out of it Warm regards allan

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Kelly Allen Vinal 18 December 2004

Rustic in an island sort of way. Good verse, timely.

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