Rein In The Five Senses Comments

Our taste buds often betray us! We gobble all that satisfies our palate and contract bodily ailments like sugar, cholesterol and increased blood pressure besides obesity! If we learn to tame our tongue and withstand its temptations, we can save doctors' bill and save our body also!

let super brain work for a holistic approach; food's wrong.side.is dark........touching expression dear poet! Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem....10

I agree with what you're saying in the poem and in the notes about it. However you should check the spelling in your notes; e should be we, et should be eat and ive should be live.