Do you know how you wound, deep into my heart?
That no melody plays like it did at the start,
You don’t need your sharp axe or your sword in scabbard,
Your words deliver the intent equally as hard,
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I find this to be a rather odd and curious writing. There are parts of this that i consider to be written quite well. There are other parts that don't find as much favor with me. Overall, I would say it is a quite average poem. Inconsistent, seems to be the word here. GW62