Sunday, June 10, 2007

Regret Ii- How It Ended... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Here I am, across the busy road,
There she is, with her radiant smile,
My caged feelings are bursting free,
I cannot contain it anymore.
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Cheryl Lynn Moyer-peele 12 August 2007

ALEX - YOUNG LOVE IS SO HONEST, SEE MY 'ITS JUST BLOOD' AND SEE IF YOU AGREE. THANKS FOR THIS - CHERYL

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Liz Elizabeth 03 August 2007

Everybody was a fool when they were in love............hope that you will find your miracle soon........and be happy forever.............

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Bittersweet with an intriguing finale from the wild side.You're quite good, keep up!

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Mary Das 14 June 2007

Oh my God, never expected this will be the ending. It's painful. I can understand how do you feel. A very touching poem. Take care my young friend.

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