Saturday, June 9, 2007

Regret- How It Started… Comments

Rating: 4.9

Everyday I set my eyes on her,
What a sight to behold,
But when she looks at me,
My heart retreats, my cards fold.
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the poet
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Blue Angel 22 March 2008

Interesting Ending...'Regret - How it started...' 'To be continued'

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Dark Mantra 14 June 2007

cool..... you express your feelings very well

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Mary Das 14 June 2007

I enjoyed reading this poem. A well written poem. You are gifted.

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Jae Centorino 12 June 2007

I love this..i have a daughter that is 16..i just wonder if someone thinks like this of her...she is a heartbreaker...Keep it up..writing poetry/lyrics is called mind-stimulation..

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Ted Sheridan 12 June 2007

You are a talented writer...I enjoyed it.

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Olabode Oluwatayo 12 June 2007

What a fantastic drive! How loud your poetry pen speaks! and well chosen poetry lines! well done! ALEX!

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Marilyn Lott 09 June 2007

A very sweet but sad poem about love. I guess we've all been through something like this at one time. Very well put!

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Edna Javelosa 09 June 2007

a secret love spoken out with a pen...nice poem, alex..

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