I like the end rhyme. You have conveyed how a woman's heart can be broken so that while she may be able to give in a limited capacity, she lives in the past, often finds it difficult to trust and give of herself completely in the present, and at times becomes a heart breaker. Excellent poem.
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I like the end rhyme. You have conveyed how a woman's heart can be broken so that while she may be able to give in a limited capacity, she lives in the past, often finds it difficult to trust and give of herself completely in the present, and at times becomes a heart breaker. Excellent poem.