Friday, December 26, 2008

Regret (26/12/ 08) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Damage has been done
Time cannot be erased
The frown you placed on her face cannot be replaced
Hurt caused by your selfishness
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Rachael Hardy
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Crystal Torres 31 December 2008

hey i liked it you worded it right and in such a way that it flowed very nicely i gave it a 10 =]

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Rachael Hardy 26 December 2008

hey John, If you have ever seen a fire in the day time the flames appear very dull because the day is already lit as oppose to seeing the flames of a fire at night time

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John Tiong Chunghoo 26 December 2008

hi rachael why should flame be dull?

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Joseph Poewhit 26 December 2008

Lives and love change in this topsy turning world

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