Thursday, April 18, 2013

Regret Comments

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Where is my backbone gone,
When I squirm as the worms,
To please the hearts to get some,
Benefits, my minds split as the atoms,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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There is no need for this regret as your are absolutely standing erect without this backbone. But the tone of admission giving way to that of confession shows your great mindset madam Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi... Congratulations.

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David Wood 19 April 2013

A lively poem and a joy to read.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 19 April 2013

Oh! Great regret! - Where is my back bone gone, - - Lovely introductory lines! - When my selfishness interrupts / I speak a different tongue- -So true of the world we live in! Beautiful write, V.S.

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Gajanan Mishra 19 April 2013

O beautiful and lovely, congratulation.

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