Sunday, June 15, 2008

Regret Comments

Rating: 5.0

Stepped on
and kicked to the curb.
I try to explain
with one single verb.
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Julie Neises
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Stone Granite 16 June 2008

Wonderfully written. Heart wrenching and honest, bit what I like most is the ending and its meaning. Another excellent poem, Jules – stay strong.

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Duy Bui 15 June 2008

Hey I really like this poem. It reminded me of another poem. Resume Razors pain you; Rivers are damp; Acids stain you; And drugs cause cramp. Guns aren't lawful; Nooses give; Gas smells awful; You might as well live. - Dorothy Parker

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Callie Carroll 15 June 2008

Really nice job. Keep writing!

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