Monday, November 2, 2009

Regret Comments

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There’s certain things you say
You can’t take back in any way.
Some things you regret for the rest of your life
Because you caused a loved one trouble or strife.
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Dean McInerney
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K. Bianca 16 February 2010

Your poem speaks beautifully to the reader. Some good rhymes throughout the poem. The ending was lovely... and full of regret?

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Dean Mcinerney 12 November 2009

Thanks so much people! ! =D

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John Mcmanus 12 November 2009

This is very good Dean with a personal touch that transmits itself through your words, despite the lack of form it has a nice flow to it, keep writing Dean and remember to keep being original.

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Forsythia Azalea 10 November 2009

This is such a nice poem xD Do your best in writing the next ones to come! ^^

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Dean Mcinerney 07 November 2009

thanks a mil! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ;)

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