There’s certain things you say
You can’t take back in any way.
Some things you regret for the rest of your life
Because you caused a loved one trouble or strife.
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This is very good Dean with a personal touch that transmits itself through your words, despite the lack of form it has a nice flow to it, keep writing Dean and remember to keep being original.
This is such a nice poem xD Do your best in writing the next ones to come! ^^
Your poem speaks beautifully to the reader. Some good rhymes throughout the poem. The ending was lovely... and full of regret?