I see you across the room, smiling in all your splendour,
Your smile glowing radiantly as you laugh,
Full of amusement and complete, intense happiness.
I laugh along with you, but as I do so my heart sighs deeply,
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this was really touching and deep, I LOVED the last 2 lines, the perfect ending ever, thgough I think you should make some lines shorter, it's lovely though, well expressed and well written :)
wow really, this is a beautiful poem that people could really relate to brilliant