Wednesday, January 5, 2022

Regarding My Poem: (Book # 1) : Sheila And Clifford: 'hello! ' ... Etc....[ Posted On Ph Beginning In 2014; Each 'book' Has Chapters ] Comments

Rating: 5.0

Chapter One

As I entered the resort condo I'd be sharing with a stranger,
I couldn't help wondering if there could be some danger ….
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Bri Edwards
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Bri Edwards 12 November 2024

THIS IS INCOMPLETE! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ASK ME! ! ! THERE ARE more CHAPTERS! !

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Bri Edwards 07 June 2023

I have a LONG series of 'Books' and Chapters about Sheila and Clifford's continuing and blossoming relationship, through dating, marraige, and having a child. PH may be missing a 'book' or two. : (

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Rod Mendieta 11 January 2022

...though I'm not sure about 'from where I'd hid'; shouldn't that had been more properly in the past participle form: 'from where I'd hidden'?

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Bri Edwards 02 February 2022

..though I'm not sure about 'from where I'd hid'; shouldn't that had been more properly in the past participle form: 'from where I'd hidden'? GOOD QUESTION, Rod. ;)))) bri

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Rod Mendieta 11 January 2022

Bloody comment box is useless unless you stick to monosyllables or telegraphic comments like 'good stuff' and such. The 300 character limit is nothing less than straight jacket! , So, 'good stuff'!

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Bri Edwards 02 February 2022

! oops! Grab the bandages. ;) bri

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Kim Barney 05 January 2022

Excellent story, Bri!

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Bri Edwards 02 February 2022

Thanks, pal. ;) OF COURSE I already KNEW it was/is 'Excellent'. ;))))))))))

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 January 2022

Hey, is the below man your friend?

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