Wednesday, May 16, 2007

Refusing To Be Just Another Girlfriend Comments

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If I am only a temperary substitute
in the darkest shadows of your desire
Then why does your every touch
Place me so much higher
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... Lynch 16 August 2007

A strong title, I urge you to stick to it. An amazing poem. No one should be a substitute, It's an insult to our devotion. -Kylie M. Lynch

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Amanda Saveley 30 July 2007

I often wonder that myself. It is similar to...if we aren't going to think, what good will it do us to speak? Can't have one without the other, and this instance is no different. Fantastic job.

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