Tuesday, May 12, 2009

Refugees Comments

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Are we to be refugees
enduring the struggle, and fight
then the headlong flight.
We leave our meagre belongings
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johnoe mc guckin
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Saadat Tahir 12 May 2009

hi johnoe you have indeed penned a great poem...its exceptional...and you can be proud of it there is no deliverance and no escaping... my friend congratulations and thanx ireally liked it and did it twice...could have been better rhymed though...purely a personal opinion cheers

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