Friday, October 24, 2014

Refugees Comments

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The homeless and rejected,
Now congregate once more,
Like flotsam and jetsam,
On some forgotten shore.
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Bri Edwards 23 June 2015

after the 4th stanza i thought i figured out what you were talking about by 'refugees'. well, i was only partly correct; not very. i thought your were really talking about stuff on a shore; 'garbage/trash' which had found its way to an ocean and washed ashore. now i've finished reading and i see the ending. but the part about summer, followed by Christmas gifts and then October........ that was a bit of a question mark for me. do you celebrate Christmas in September in your part of the world? ? bri :) i guess it has something to do with the southern hemisphere seasons being different than ours up 'north'.

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