Refugee Bird Comments

Forgive me but I have suggested the poem by its first line instead of title. Yes this is a very good poem, and only a few spelling tweaks would improve it. The one I meant to recommend to you is – On the Horns of the Moon - This poem reminds me of a similar poem that cannot but be loved by all: I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings by Maya Angelou. Adeline

it's good.in this poem the line i like most 'make a nest on the chamber of my heart'.

Nice concepts of a refugee bird depicted here.Well done.