Saturday, January 26, 2019

Refrigerant Morning Comments

Rating: 5.0

The refrigerator is empty, just a few rather stale veg stuck in a shady recess,
a metaphor, I think, for my empty and staid life, a mouldy morsel of cheese green and dry, like the jealousy I feel for lovers who walk in the park
walking hand in hand, stopping every now and then for a stray kiss.
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Rajnish Manga 26 January 2019

Random musings crafted beautifully. Perfect use of metaphor to express inner feelings of loss. Thanks. like the jealousy I feel for lovers who walk.... hand in hand stopping every now and then for a stray kiss. punch a hole (in the sky) ....so the sun might shaft through and thaw my emotions.

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