Thursday, April 24, 2014

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Rating: 4.3

Wake up and smell the sweet roses
Nice aromas wafting up your noses
Rise up from your slumbering sleep
Open the door and take a big peep
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Patricia Grantham
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Amitava Sur 31 May 2014

Reading this poem right in the morning very honestly I feel so refreshed that I remember you repeatedly now Patricia! ! A lovely poem I read.

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Om Chawla 09 May 2014

What a lovely write and so well rhymed, Pat. I join Valsa in wishing you the ensuing days to be full peace, delight and beauty.

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The sun has risen and shines anew Earth renewed from the morning dew Beautiful day opens up. Rise up and enjoy the surroundings. Enjoy the life. Thank you.

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Rise up from your slumbering sleep Open the door and take a big peep, i can feel that mornig eagerness

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Valsa George 27 April 2014

Lovely poem... Pat! A very promising day is at our door step....! Let us greet this day with rising delight and hope that the ensuing days also will be as beautiful as today...! Small and sweet write! !

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Captain Herbert Poetry 24 April 2014

Wow. I voted and rate 10.

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Patricia Grantham

Patricia Grantham

Moncks Corner, South Carolina
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