Refraction Comments

Making a rainbow in my sky.....what an imaginative poem is! Wonderful presentation.

Great imagery with amazing words.......Valsa......specially with this line as Making a rainbow in my sky, I am lost......great composition....10

nice ply of words...hats off

a palpable and lovable one for us.........

Beautiful Valsa, very imaginative.

rainbow in heart's sky/ beautiful expression! ! ! ! ! top marksss! !

Dear Stevie, as suggested by you I have changed the word 'atoms' with 'photons'. Thanks for the suggestion!

Joy makes a rainbow in the sky from the prism of your mind is a fantastic thought which enthuses joy in my mind.A classic cute poem.!

This poem shows feeling of great enjoyment of life! As a scientist I would maybe have preferred photons or waves instead of atoms but it doesn't really distract from the emotion put across! : -)

brilliant.. deserves a 10+++

i love this.. short and sweet!

Making a rainbow in my sky. Good. I love it. I invite you to read my poems and comment,

That is beautiful. So simple yet so profound.