Refraction Poem by Valsa George
Refraction
In the prism of my mind
Joy refracts into a billion photons of colours
Making a rainbow in my sky
rainbow in heart's sky/ beautiful expression! ! ! ! ! top marksss! !
Dear Stevie, as suggested by you I have changed the word 'atoms' with 'photons'. Thanks for the suggestion!
Joy makes a rainbow in the sky from the prism of your mind is a fantastic thought which enthuses joy in my mind.A classic cute poem.!
Making a rainbow in my sky.....what an imaginative poem is! Wonderful presentation.
Great imagery with amazing words.......Valsa......specially with this line as Making a rainbow in my sky, I am lost......great composition....10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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11/16/2025 9:56:51 PM # 1.0.0
Making a rainbow in my sky. Good. I love it. I invite you to read my poems and comment,