Saturday, June 20, 2009

Reflective Romance Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dear, you learn by mind
Memoirs of yesterdays
Dear, know me again
I’m still loving you
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Jaleel Perinjanam
COMMENTS
Zeinab Sherif 19 July 2009

A perfect poem this one.it deserves10++++

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Seema Aarella 05 July 2009

Passionate whispers in the loved ones ears, so dauntless and confident a lover feels when blessed with the girl of his love.......nice feelings, nice poem! ! ! !

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Sandhya S N 02 July 2009

Dear, Lovely written words form your heart It is true that no one can ever forget one's first love sandhya

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Priyanka Bhowmick 01 July 2009

a touching piece.. shades of true love.. lovely penned.

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Shilpa Luthra 01 July 2009

I m speechless. i just almost cried.....so touching. so real.... m so glad to read ur poem. Good Job...

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Merna Ibrahim 30 June 2009

what a romantic poem! ! ...........so emotional, , , , , keep it up...10/10. Merna

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Eyan Desir 29 June 2009

Good write Jaleel 10 points

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ata khan 29 June 2009

nice and easy way to reflect romance i like your style thanks for sharing

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Obinna Eruchie 28 June 2009

'Whenever enfold me, / Solicited deep kiss, / Obvious your sparkling eyes/ Pleaded for the passion', I love this ones most especially, they are remarkable.

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Surya . 28 June 2009

vow1 beautiful and exclusive voted10 surya

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Naidz Ladia 28 June 2009

i could not write anything except this is ''beautiful'..naizz

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rago rago 28 June 2009

nice work and so tender and the words too reflective as your caption...... well done Sir, ......pls see my 10>.........

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Rubas Kutty 24 June 2009

Great work. It's nicer the way you have spun the web from the mind to heart. The 'reflective' might have tilted the scales to the 'mind' though. 10/10 for the sheer intensity of everlasting nostalgic love. Expecting more from the arsenal where it came! !

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Nooruddeen Mm 23 June 2009

Very sincere and delicate. These words were gathered up directly from the heart. Occasionally I recollect those words from my piece of work (Photos Speak) “Oh! My Girl, you have never been a girl In my forgotten corner of mind, thus far, You are with me, as the shadow of mine Wherever I am Ever since you walked off To reunite in our next birth…..” Good work, we expect more Thank you for sharing Nooruddeen

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poem seems so tender with true words from one's heart.. nice..

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Lady Grace 21 June 2009

so nice and gentle to read, , beautiful as ever..love is always waiting...grace

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Chitra - 20 June 2009

eternal devotion to a beloved one nicely done Sir

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