Friday, October 23, 2009

Reflections On Serenity Comments

Rating: 5.0

From where did I come and from this point
What do I become and where do I go to?
My mind becomes a jumble of whats and whys and wheres.
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Rani Turton
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Ranjit Ravindran 03 November 2009

A lovely poem.. Liked these lines the most. ........................................................................................... My mind becomes a jumble of whats and whys and wheres. ........................................................................................... Sometimes, pause and listen to earth's heartbeat. ...........................................................................................

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Shanta Majumder 25 October 2009

Sometimes, pause and listen to earth's heartbeat. Still your mind, and still your feet. So truly it is suggested....liked your thought.....10

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Kesav Easwaran 24 October 2009

you go poetically phiosophic there Rani...much truth inside...thanks...10

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 24 October 2009

such stillness and peace as you read the last two lines...beautiful

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Sandra Fowler 23 October 2009

All poets worthy of the name are at one with water, sky and the earth. Lovely write... Always your friend, Sandra

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Patti Masterman 23 October 2009

This is so peaceful, Rani. Especially that line, about pausing to listen to the earth's heartbeat. Just lovely.

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