Tuesday, August 9, 2016

Reflections (On Self, God, And Potentiality) Comments

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When I try to search for my identity
I find countless layers of realized
And unrealized potentialities.
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Savita Tyagi
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Valsa George 31 August 2016

'We live our lives with a divided self. A self that is active and vibrant, Wants to live life with all its passions, But there is this silent inactive self That pulls us for life's quieter reflection...........'........ This I believe is the core of the poem! There is always a war going on in man between these divided selves. One who can strike a balance between the two is able to procure happiness! A poem of profound thoughts! A 10

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Savita Tyagi 03 September 2016

Thank you Valsa for your thoughtful comment. You are right, life is all about striking a balance that makes you happy and works for you in a positive way.

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Akhtar Jawad 22 August 2016

To me the poem seems based on Bhagvad Geeta. Sometimes we should think and do something without any fear of failure and without any greed of success. Such an act, that is free of fear and greed brings best of the mental peace.

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Savita Tyagi 22 August 2016

Thank you Akhtarji for your thoughtful comment. Geeta and other spiritual teachings probably have influenced me in more ways than I know or can think of.

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Savita Tyagi 22 August 2016

And I am still learning and exploring.

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Annette Aitken 09 August 2016

Very deep and meaningful...nice work Annette

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Savita Tyagi 09 August 2016

Thanks Annette for reading and for your comment. Appreciate it very much.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 August 2016

Finding realized or unrealized potentialities is common and uncommon too while we search for countless truth of this universe. Having self realization we try to stabilize minds. This is the way to spiritually approach mind to direct in Godly way. Neutral steps are needed. There is no need to be worried about loosing and gaining comes through spiritual awakening that enlightens life. EXCELLENT WORK....10

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Savita Tyagi 09 August 2016

Thank you Kumarmani for reading the poem and your thoughtful comment and deep insight. Appreciate it very much.

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