Tuesday, September 1, 2009

Reflections Of An Ordinary Life Comments

Rating: 2.9

I walk this dusty path, nothing before me but the night.
The sun setting on my left, the moon rising to my right.
The shock of this vast existence takes over my mind.
How can this battle of light and dark be so intertwined?
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Natasha Dowdy
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Ramesh Rai 13 October 2013

an ordinary life goes on an easy way. a good write

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Khairul Ahsan 17 August 2013

Reflections of extra ordinary thoughts in an emphatic way. 10/10

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John Mcmanus 14 October 2009

This is very nice Natasha, I liked it alot and thought you described everything beautifully, really well done.

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Keith Hendrickson 09 September 2009

i loved this piece. i really liked the last 2 lines. once again very nice flow. it didnt seem forced and thats part of what makes your flow very good.

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Sadiqullah Khan 01 September 2009

continue on, my faith in what is true and right shall never waver. This momentary reflection of my life I will forever savor. ..........punch lines. Faith.10 plus

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