Thursday, June 14, 2007

Reflections Of An Autopsy Undone Comments

Rating: 5.0

Another interruption in duty and chore;
A call to task behind the gray door.
With ' Y ' cut to make,
and samples to take;
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Sara Jo Andrews 16 December 2008

I have no to words to express how this poem moved me... in sad regret to praise a poem so well written the only word i have excellent

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Sandra Fowler 29 August 2007

A poem of immeasurable sadness which reveals the noble character of the poet who penned it. Excellent work. Ten seems inadequate here. Warmest regards, Sandra

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THE FIRST SHRIKE 18 July 2007

such horrowing pain in said same words eyes wittness the end bact to birth with such grace in tears you still so do shed in heavy demand of the work Eloquence to Eleagant no vessels that so held the fragile gift your eye saw well... Take care

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Not a member No 4 08 July 2007

The introductory stanzas set the scene very effectively, facilitating the contrast from the 'norm' that's to come. A memorably sorrowful depiction of the psychological demands of a harrowing responsibility, and a very human response. Again, the language choice, and form are top quality. Superb and very moving poem.

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Walt this is quite a powerful and sad piece of work...I can feel the pain of the poet and I can tell obviously there are those times where one can not remain distant in this type of work... The wrods you chose for this imagery and emotion filled piece are just what was needed to get your point across! Wow...it is too bad one must experieince such frustration and deep sadness in order to do justice to the topic at hand... Really excellent work and as I type this I say thanx to God for you...for giving you the gift to be able to do this job for I know I could not.... Thank you Walt for sharing...10/10. Take care of U =Shelley=

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Gold Flower 15 June 2007

This is a super deep poem! I was right! These poems are great!

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Elysabeth Faslund 14 June 2007

A most different piece. Another glimpse in putting the pieces of the puzzle together. The 'Y' as the question...CSI will never be the same. Great poem as an introduction to your work on poemhunter! xxElysabeth

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