Reflections Of A Departing Day Comments
As the sun sinks suddenly beneath the horizon,
It leaves behind its twilight glow, to show,
Path to the birds returning to their nests,
To the herds of cattle returning to their sheds,
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nature has power to live naturally though human is part of nature but forgetting own power now busy making riot in world to mere survive
Of all the species of nature, humans are the most destructive. Thanks for reading my poem and leaving a comment here, @Mahtab Bangalee.
As the sun sinks suddenly beneath the horizon, It leaves behind its twilight glow, to show, Path to the birds returning to their nests, To the herds of cattle returning to their sheds, ......fantastic beginning with thrilling expression. A beautiful poem has been executed by you having nice perception. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks for quoting lines from my poem, @Kumarmani Mahakul. Your appreciation of the poem makes it worthwhile. Much inspired.
The twilight evening is beautifully presented in mute shades when Nature with all creatures is getting ready for the impending night fall. The poetic observations of the nocturnal scene are so beautiful that the poem sets the mood of joy and tranquility in a casual observer. Lovely write with a lovely image.
Thanks for the high praise. Much inspired by your appraisal of the poem, @Valsa George.
Nature fails not, to pay homage to the setting sun. The chirping birds sing the day's last chorus of hymn, Before they go quiet in their nests and fall asleep, Thanking God for the food they ate all day long, Correct observation! While the whole of creation expresses gratitude to God in one way or the other, man alone is busy with his own preoccupations and never look up in thankfulness to the Great Provider and Creator!
Thank you very much Valsa, for sharing your thoughts here. The poem has been enriched by your thoughtful comment.
Bards to ponder! With the romance of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
I love the depth of this poem. The details that you display in this piece explaining the daily and nightly activities of nature. I just really liked this poem.
Thank you, dear poet @Craig Mize, for the thoughtful comment you've left here, on my poem. Much inspired by your appreciation of my humble effort.
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A beautiful write, detailing life's amazing beauty.
Thank you @Lyn Paul, for appreciating my poem. Much inspired by your comment.