Saturday, April 23, 2011

Reflections By The Seashore Comments

Rating: 5.0

The pebbles on the shore are black as the soot on a miner's face,
The the dark gritty sand shuffles into the ground like a dancing couple,
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Joseph Wraithbone
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Jon Mcintosh 23 April 2011

This is an awesome poem! Here's my favorite part; 'Aqua, smooth stone grey, parchment tan and turquoise green, The ocean waves sway back and forth, like a swing set on a cold winter day. The icy wind send chills down my back, almost as if you're standing there beside me.' Beautiful.

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