Wednesday, September 11, 2013

Reflections Comments

Rating: 5.0

September's sorrow
Cascade of tears, to water
Near the tower's grave
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Susan Lacovara
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Anthony Burkett 03 February 2014

The juxtaposition is classic! My complements on a beautiful haiku!

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Unwritten Soul 12 September 2013

The chosen words just right the september....tower...and rain...it just described the remembrance of tragedy very well. Oh i wish if i can have this world just 1 hour in happiness and no war...just 1 hour... back in reality, even to have this within 5seconds almost impossible but i never give up for humanity_Soul

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