Reflections - 3 Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Reflections - 3

Rating: 5.0


Noon groping the sun
Head clearing somehow
Mind getting focused
Heart wondering how

Friday, December 9, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: lessons of life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Reflections Series
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 09 December 2022

I got my vitamin D in this morning's sun, it kinda went pear shaped after that.

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Richard Wlodarski 09 December 2022

That's very funny, David. Cheers to pears!

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Richard Wlodarski 12 December 2022

Dillip, Many THX for adding the Reflection Series to your favourites!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 11 December 2022

Noon groping, head clearing, mind focussed....No wonder the heart is happy......Marvellous poem Richard. You made the point clear with four lines......Top score + To my favourite

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Richard Wlodarski 12 December 2022

You see, it doesn't take much to have a happy heart. And it's even happier when it receives such positive constructive criticism. And when the poem ends up in your favourites.THX so very much, Geeta!

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Nosheen Irfan 10 December 2022

An excellent four liner! Love the imagery!

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Richard Wlodarski 12 December 2022

Many THX, Nosheen for your very positive comments!

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Pallab Chaudhury 10 December 2022

Beautiful imagery... Merry Christmas and Happy New Year 2023.

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Richard Wlodarski 12 December 2022

THX so very much, Pallab for your positive comment and Season's Greetings. Wishing you a Great Christmas and The Very Best in 2023!

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Anjandev Roy 10 December 2022

Marvelous short work....

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